Building Our Own Monuments by Lani Longshore

The ancient Egyptians revered their scribes. The pharaoh was a scribe. One of the craters on the moon is named after Thoth, god of the scribes. According to a poem that I believe is ancient (but can’t remember where I found it or all of the words), the scribes may be dead, their families gone, but what they wrote will keep the memory of them alive as long as there are readers.

That doesn’t necessarily mean their names are remembered. Like wonderful character actors, you may forget the names but you remember the faces and the way you felt watching their work. Today, that hope of someone remembering my words if not my name is enough to get me back to the keyboard. I encourage you all—keep on writing, keep on publishing, keep on blogging. Even if our words offer only a fragile immortality, they are our best monuments.

Character, Plot and Writing Happiness by Lani Longshore

I started writing another book. I have a title (The Captain and Chenille), and a concept. That is, I had a concept until I realized the universe is telling me to rethink the idea. I wasn’t listening to my characters telling me what they wanted to do, and my writing time wasn’t happy.

First came the October Tri-Valley Writers workshop with Scott Evans. His concept that character drives plot resonated with me, and I filled pages with notes on my two protagonists. From those notes I developed a rough outline of the novel. Unfortunately, it had one of those “Step 2: And Then A Miracle Occurs” middles.

Luckily for me, one of my critique groups decided to spend a day together in our own personal, private writing workshop. During that workshop I got an earful about my characters. It was all good, and all energizing. I went home and added those notes to my outline. The outline looked stronger, but the middle still needed work. I stared at the screen, saved the document and signed off.

Then a member of my other critique group lent me a fabulous book, Storytelling Genius by Lisa Cron. Like Evans, her position is that character not only drives plot, it drives the reader. Once again, every cell in my brain quivered with delight. I realized I wanted to know my characters so much better before I started on chapter one of the novel.

As I write practice scenes and more focused back story, I have a much better idea of what I want to say, and what events will help me say it. I am happy with my writing, and I’m even confident I’ll get that murky middle fixed.

A Second Chance at Ekphrasis by Lani Longshore

Even if you  missed the deadline to write about the artwork on the Winterfest 2017 page, here is a visual prompt to let you experience the challenge now.


Photo Credit: Lani Longshore

My husband and I bought this vine because we had never seen such an unusual flower. The gardener in him looked forward to seeing it wind its way up a pergola. The Sci-Fi writer in me saw opportunities for world building.

Examine the flower. If you write romance, imagine it in a bridal bouquet. Do you prefer mystery? Set it in a funeral wreath. Now, throw some words on the page. I’m thinking of my next intergalactic setting (which is why I cropped the picture the way I did):


fragile purple spikes

hovering above white sheets

I dream of space ships


You don’t have to write much. Even a few phrases may lead to a longer piece later. The real benefit is in absorbing the world around you, and letting fragments of what you experience inspire your writing.


Lament for the Winter Solstice by Lani Longshore

Lani LongshoreAnd so the darkest day arrives, and everywhere the storytellers settle in to bring the people through the night. Or we would, if someone would leave us alone long enough to write the story first, then revise it, then send it to beta readers, and finally do one last edit before the performance.

Every year, I envision the perfect holiday. The house is beautifully decorated, the presents are all hand-made and meaningful, the food is nutritious as well as delicious. That has never been the reality.

The same is true of my writing fantasies. Every year, I envision entering contests (and winning), creating the perfect platform, writing the blogs that everyone goes to first. Sometimes the tyranny of daily responsibilities gets in the way, sometimes my inner editor gets in the way, and sometimes I just can’t muster the energy to do more than sit on the couch and drink tea.

Then the darkest day arrives, and I’m reminded that the sun will be shining one minute longer tomorrow, another minute longer the day after. Winter solstice teaches us that while there is an end, so also is there a beginning. Today I may be glued to my couch, tea cup in one hand, TV remote in the other. Tomorrow, I’ll be glued to my chair, both hands on the keyboard.

And a Happy New Year to you all.

What I Discovered At The Bottom Of The Pile by Lani Longshore

Lani LongshoreMy organizational system is one of stack management. I try to keep elements to any given project in the same general vicinity on my desk, but sometimes I don’t work at my desk. Then all bets are off. Luckily, every so often there’s a meeting at my house, or a relative visiting, or a holiday, and I have to clean. I’m always amazed at what I find.

This time of year I have to clear out the stacks of books and papers in the living room to accommodate the Christmas tree. More often than not I try to hide everything under the piano bench, but that wasn’t an option. There were already stacks under the piano bench. So, I had to grit my teeth and put things in their proper place.

To my surprise, most of the books were there because my husband emptied a bookcase, intending to build a new and better one, then got distracted before he finished that project. However, there were two books about building author platforms at the bottom of one pile. One of the books had a checklist that I had actually started, then I got distracted before I finished.

The good news is, I mostly like surprises, especially when I can spread the blame for the chaos. The better news is, now I have a new project to fill those few odd moments I’ll have to myself over the holidays. With any luck, by the time the new year rolls around, I’ll have myself a fabulous author platform.

When a Writer Gives Thanks by Lani Longshore

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This year I am giving thanks to the army of on-line security workers. These people, who think up such clever questions to answer when setting up a new account, have just given me another opportunity to create backstory for my characters.

Consider the questions:

  • what is your favorite music?
  • what was your first car?
  • what was the mascot of your high school?

There is no law that says you have to be honest when you answer, just that you remember what you entered. Why not use this opportunity to develop your protagonist? What music would she listen to most? What car would stick in her mind, the one in which she learned to drive or the first one she bought? Was she the mascot and always hated the costume?

I plan to look for other opportunities to explore character, or at least try out some ideas. My local grocery is starting their annual food drive. Every time you donate, you can write your name on a card that is posted on the wall. I think I will start writing potential character names and see what feels right. Look for my handwriting on the wall.

Got An Hour? by Camille DeFer Thompson

BioPhoto-CamilleTri-Valley Writers is gearing up for a busy year. I volunteered to put together the flyers for our upcoming events. I love designing newsletters, brochures, posters and the like. I’m quirky that way. I’ll also help again this year decorating the bulletin boards advertising our events at local libraries.

Along with other TVW dedicated volunteers, fellow member and good friend, Stacey Gustafson, has stepped up as publicity chair for a second term. I’ll be helping her from time to time, as well. And I’m sure I’ll find other ways to assist the branch in the coming months.

“What’s in it for me?” you ask. Volunteering is a great way to network with other members and learn about ways to achieve your writing goals. And maybe you’ll even share some laughs. I’ve received leads for submitting my work and learned tips for improving my writing simply by “talking shop” while working side-by-side with other members. And between you and me, my non-writer friends (lovely people though they are) tend to nod off or change the subject whenever I bring up a challenge I’m facing with my latest WIP. Not so with your fellow wordsmiths.

Even if all you have is one hour, consider volunteering (especially for Tri-Valley Writers!). The time you spend will come back to you, maybe in the form of a great character or outstanding story.


Why I Write by Camille DeFer Thompson

BioPhoto-CamilleHow might a musician answer the question, “Why do you play?” What would an artist reply to, “Why do you paint?”

My fascination for the written word began early in life. At the tender age of eleven, I submitted a short story to the children’s column of the Oakland Tribune, and won top honors.

Over the years, I learned that many of my co-workers found writing tasks to be near insurmountable challenges, in the same category with public speaking. They often appealed to me to assist them with correspondence to clients. I welcomed the opportunity to edit their work and advise them on composition, sentence structure and tone. I sometimes wondered how they missed the most obvious lessons of high school English class. It always felt so natural to weave thoughts into words on the page. I even wrote articles for the company newsletter. The advent of word processing made the already pleasurable activity even more enjoyable.

That’s not to say that I don’t struggle with writer’s block from time to time. I marvel at my writer friends’ ability to “write every day.” My muse visits on her own unpredictable schedule. But without fail when offered an idea or a topic, I experience a tingle of excitement at the opportunity to work a little word sleight of hand.

Why do I write? I write simply to satisfy my desire…and to create a little magic.

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